Tuesday, October 1, 2013

Vintageville #9

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Lisette said...

Oh no! She'll have to learn fast! I like this old lady character.
P.S. - I have trouble following the multiple back-and-forth dialogue bubbles (I'm sure that has a much more concise name), like in panel 3. I don't know why as I feel like it should be straightforward. Maybe because I don't read graphic novels too often? Just a thought.

Shelley J said...

Tis par for the course of the comic world.

When I read comics, I have problems following them sometimes, too. Often I have to do a double read. A good rule of thumb is start with the highest bubble first in the panel (no matter if its to the left or right and zip-zag down following dialogue lines. Each bubble is a brake in the conversation for the other character to respond.

For this particular panel, I kind of meant it to be confusing. Lady is pretty caught off guard. She had no idea what is going on :)

Kimberly said...

omg you really know how to keep me on the edge of my seat! can't wait for the next one.

also, personally i like the way you did the dialogue, it really felt like she was getting 'bowled over' by the lady in the shop! i'm both excited for and nervous for Ladie.

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